Was it written well?
In my experience and skills as a Electrical Engineering student, I know how getting more professional experience is very important in subject related with energy sector, instrumentation, automation or other areas.

In my skills is found communication habilities, work in team, attainment objectives, being proactive, responsible, creative, being punctual, being identified with the activity to be develop and very motivated and always ready to learn new things.

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Was it written well?
In my experience and skills as a Electrical Engineering student, I know how getting more professional experience is very important in subject related with energy sector, instrumentation, automation or other areas.

In my skills is found communication habilities, work in team, attainment objectives, being proactive, responsible, creative, being punctual, being identified with the activity to be develop and very motivated and always ready to learn new things.

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This is written very well, just a couple of small corrections but otherwise really good.
'In my skills is found communication habilities, work in team, attainment objectives,'
 I think it should read ' I have good communication skills, the ability to work as part of a team and to successfully meet my objectives'  that's the only bit I would change. 
Good luck

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