How can I say the sentence in a proper way.
"To answer the question, we have to know what are the needs of the him, and which need of him we must meet in the first place, and which need we should try to meet. " I‘ve adjust the sentence for a much clearer meaning:
To answer the question, we have to know what the needs of the other side are, and which needs of him we must meet in the first place, and which need of him is not that important but we should try to meet. “We have already known the characteristics of business negotiation and the importance of negotiation strategies. But how can we make the other side feel pleasant or think our ideas are reasonable while there is conflict of profits in our business negotiation? How can we adjust our demands and interests to approach the agreeable point and keep a good relationship with the other side? To answer the question, we have to know what the needs of the other side are, and which needs of him we must meet in the first place, and which need of him is not that important but we should try to meet.”
I mean, I want to hear some suggestions from you for the grammar and structure of the sentence in this paragraph. Is this sentence look comfortable? I don't really know whether "the other side " is used appropriete in the sentence. It means, the person you negotiate with in a negotiation. I don't know which word can be used better than "the other side", though it seems wierd.
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I think,you need express your idea clear and detailedly so that others can help you,for eg.what's meaning of 'proper way' ,it is hard to define
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(We have already known the characteristics of business negotiation and the importance of negotiation strategies.)
We all know the nature and importance of today's negotiation.
( But how can we make the other side feel pleasant or think our ideas are reasonable while there is conflict of profits in our business negotiation? )
We also all know that our client feels there is a conflict of profit. How can we help our client see that our proposal is reasonable?
(How can we adjust our demands and interests to approach the agreeable point and keep a good relationship with the other side?)
How can we adjust our proposal to reach a mutually beneficial agreement and to keep our good relationship with the client?
(To answer the question, we have to know what the needs of the other side are, and which needs of him we must meet in the first place, and which need of him is not that important but we should try to meet.”)
To find our answer, we need to know our clients needs, which need we should meet first and how we should prioritize all his other needs.
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“To answer the question, we have to know his (or their) needs, and prioritise them to know which ones we have to meet first.” That is what I think.
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"To answer the question, we have to know what are the needs of the him, and which need of him we must meet in the first place, and which need we should try to meet. "
To answer the question, we have to know what his needs are, and which of his needs must be met first. Moreover, his less important need must be given their due consideration.
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Could you provide some more context? What is "the other side"? Who is "him"?
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