I need to remove one word.Only one word and at the end the same meaning
It was my place. Little by little I felt uncomfortable, but it was where I lived. Suddenly, something pushed me. I didn't see anything. I was heading faster and faster towards a narrow corridor. Something caught me and hit me, I wanted to shout. My lungs burnt. I was born

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"Something caught me and hit me"
Remove the "and" and replace with a comma.

hope that helps

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This is an awesome paragraph. It's soo interesting. 
You can remove "Suddenly".
or change " i was heading" to " I headed"

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