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Is this correct? Smoker and non-smoker blog. Hi, welcome everybody, It is our blog, we are smokers, non-smokers and former-smokers. It is open for everybody and I would like that, all of us, have the freedom of expression to talk about smoker and non-smokers rights. This is my experience. As a former-smoker I know both points of view. When I used to smoke I was very careful not to smoke where I would bother other people, especially indoors, hospitals, classrooms, etc. I didn't think whether smoke or non-smoke was bad for myself, only I knew that I was bothering somebody. I didn't decide to give smoking up. I didn't try to give smoking up, and I started to smoke when I was young. Ten years ago I gave it up because I suffered for serious flu. Little by little I didn't feel like smoking, one day past, one week, one month, two months, until today. I didn't feel any kind of withdrawal symptoms. I am a lucky man, I know. Now, I don't like the smell of cigarettes. Moreover, I hate the smell of cigarettes on my clothes. I am very happy to get this achievement. Definitely, I forgot this issue. Smokers have the right to smoke and to have lung cancer, mouth cancer, emphysema, heart illness, worst breath and yellow teeth and fingers. Non-smokers have rights, too. They can choose to be as healthy as possible. They don't like inhaling smoke. When a smoker is smoking in a public place, he is raising our risk of developing health illness. Rafael Pérez Legarre More ideas? Write here please...

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Hi, I suggest that you post this sort of text in Notebook for correction as it is easier to correct there.
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Hi, welcome everybody, This our blog, we are smokers, non-smokers and former smokers. It is open for everybody and I would like that, all of us have the freedom of expression to talk about smokers and non-smokers rights. This is my experience. As a former smoker I know both points of view. When I used to smoke I was very careful not to smoke where I would bother other people, especially indoors, hospitals, classrooms, etc. I didn't think whether I smoked or didn't smoke was bad for myself, I only knew that I was bothering somebody. I didn't decide to give smoking up. I didn't try to give smoking up, and I started to smoke when I was young. Ten years ago I gave it up because I suffered a serious flu. Little by little I didn't feel like smoking, one day past, one week, one month, two months, until today. I didn't feel any kind of withdrawal symptoms. I am a lucky man, I know. Now, I don't like the smell of cigarettes. Moreover, I hate the smell of cigarettes on my clothes. I am very happy to have this achievement. Definitely, I forgot this issue. Smokers have the right to smoke and to have lung cancer, mouth cancer, emphysema, heart illness, worst breath and yellow teeth and fingers. Non-smokers have rights, too. They can choose to be as healthy as possible. They don't like inhaling smoke. When a smoker is smoking in a public place, he is raising our risk of developing health illnesses. Rafael Pérez Legarre More ideas? Write here please... (tried to correct it as much as i could, pretty much perfect though)

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