Please correct errors
나는 이 월에 혼자서 중국에 일본에서 배로갔습니다. 중국에 갔을 때 갖자기 나라에서 온 사람돌을 친구가 됬습니다.
더욱 중국의 나중 가자후수탄에도 갔습니다. 나무 추운 데다가 관광명서가 적은 나라이지만 갈만했습니다.

덧붙여서 삼월 이십오일부터 한국에 유학하러 가니까 기때하고 있습니다.
한국에 있을떼 더 중국도 몬골에서도 갈 까합니다.

I visited China by a boat from Japan. When I was in China, I have met and make a friend with a lot of people came from the whole world.
After visiting China, I also visited Kazakhstan. Kazakhstan was really cold and whats more, there are a few sightseeing spot though it’s worth visiting.

By the way, supposed to go South Korea from 25th March as a study abroad, I'm so excited. While I am in Korea, I would like to go China and Mongolia.

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Please correct errors 
나는 이 월에 혼자서 중국에 일본에서 배로갔습니다. 중국에 갔을 때 갖자기 나라에서 온 사람돌을 친구가 됬습니다.
더욱 중국의 나중 가자후수탄에도 갔습니다. 나무 추운 데다가 관광명서가 적은 나라이지만 갈만했습니다.

덧붙여서 삼월 이십오일부터 한국에 유학하러 가니까 기때하고 있습니다.
한국에 있을떼 더 중국도 몬골에서도 갈 까합니다.

I visited China by a boat from Japan. When I was in China, I have met and make a friend with a lot of people came from the whole world.
After visiting China, I also visited Kazakhstan. Kazakhstan was really cold and whats more, there are a few sightseeing spot though it’s worth visiting.

By the way, supposed to go South Korea from 25th March as a study abroad, I'm so excited. While I am in Korea, I would like to go China and Mongolia.

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