can anyone help to correct this sentence thanks
Using the murphy's law On my own benefit,,with the 5 senses activated in every aspect of my life ,,Indeed I need to accumulate knowledge and financial experience in an asymmetric way as soon as posible, every day I'm getting closer to my primary goals
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Murphy's Law is "If anything can go wrong, it will." From your paragraph, it is not clear why you are mentioning Murphy's Law. Also, I would use more periods.
SUGGESTED CORRECTION: I need to acquire financial knowledge and experience as fast as I can. Every day I am one step closer to meeting my goals.
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Murphy's Law= is a saying= if anything can go wrong it will.
For example , it is Murphy's law that if you wear a white shirt, you should never eat anything like beetroot or tomato sauce, because you will stain your shirt.
In light of your sentence, Murphy's Law would say state that it's a challenge to get ahead in life, no matter what you do. .
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Using the Murphy's* law for* my own benefit,with 5 senses activated in every aspect of my life,indeed* I need to accumulate knowledge and financial experience in an asymmetric way as soon as possible* and* every day I'm getting closer to my primary goals.
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