Are these sentences okay?
She becomes the center of attention wherever she goes.
She becomes the center of attraction wherever she goes.

because of she's pretty etc.

Question

Are these sentences okay?
She becomes the center of attention wherever she goes.
She becomes the center of attraction wherever she goes.

because of she's pretty etc.

Answer

"Center of attention" is a common phrasing so it's a referent for any other similar sentence pattern.Changing a cliche, or familiar phrasing, would have to be purposeful like a play on words, for instance, but your second sentence doesn't do this -so, it's awkward, rather than effective.

Answer

Your first sentence is correct.  You could also say:
She attracts attention wherever she goes, because she's so pretty.

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