Help with my German!! Helfen Sie mir bitte!!
Does the following make sense? First I'll put the English version and then my German translation.
English:
In my freetime I like to watch movies, play the piano, and play sports. Last weekend I watched "The Girl Who Played With Fire" with my roommate. We both liked the movie, but I didn't like it as much as the first movie in the series. This week I have also watched "127 Hours," which is also a good movie, but is very disturbing at the end.
I like to play the piano often. This week I have learned to play a new song - "Clocks" by Coldplay. I also know how to play a few others songs that I have learned recently, including "The Luckiest" by Ben Folds, "100 Years" by Five For Fighting, and several more.
This weekend I am going home and I am very excited! I don't know exactly what I am going to do, but later next week I'm meeting up with a friend and we are going to visit another friend at UMass Amherst. Of course, I am also going to practice speaking German over Spring Vacation.
German:
In meiner Freizeit Ich mag, um Filme anzusehen, Klavier spielen und Sport treiben. Letztes Wochenende sah ich "The Girl Who Played With Fire" mit meinem Mitbewohner. Wir beide mochte den Film, aber ich mochte es nicht so viel wie der erste Film in der Reihe. Diese Woche habe ich auch gesehen "127 Hours", das ist auch ein guter Film, aber gefiel mir überhaupt am Ende.
Ich mag das Klavier oft zu spielen. Diese Woche habe ich gelernt, ein neues Lied zu spielen - "Clocks" von Coldplay. Ich weiß auch, wie man ein paar andere Songs, die ich vor kurzem, auch "der glücklichste" von Ben Folds, "100 Years" von Five For Fighting, und einige mehr spielen gelernt.
Dieses Wochenende habe ich gehe nach Hause und ich bin sehr aufgeregt! Ich weiß nicht genau, was ich tun werde, später aber nächste Woche treffe ich mich mit einem Freund und wir werden einen anderen Freund zu besuchen UMass Amherst. Außerdem habe ich vor zu studieren, damit ich weiter bekommen können.
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Answers · 2
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1. Essays like this belong in your notebook.
2. Break them up into shorter paragraphs. It really is a headache going through something like this.
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