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THEY RICH AND FAMOUS BUT THEY HAD SOME PROBLEM WHEN THEY WERE TEENAGERS.
I didn`t meet somebody in my life who had very rich parents or were famous when they were teenager. However, I often watch kids in movies who have some problem in real life.
My favorite actors Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen are beautiful examples such kids.
Mary-Kate was born in L.A. 13 July 1987.
Ashley was born in Sherman Oaks 13 June 1986.
They were popular film stars when they were teenager. In movies they often play teenagers who have some problem in their rich life. However, they often win this problem in unreal life.
Today they are pretty, rich and famous but in their real teenager life they were problem.
For example in 2004 Mary-Kate had problem with health. She treated her anorexia nervosa.
I think this is problem for many teenager who had popularity when they were young. Looks are very important for film stars. Unfortunately sometimes this begin problem for them.
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THEY were RICH AND FAMOUS BUT THEY HAD SOME PROBLEM WHEN THEY WERE TEENAGERS.
I HAVE NEVER ME ANYONE who had very rich parents or were famous when they were teenager. However, I often watch kids in movies who ACTUALLY HAVE SERIOUS LIFE problems.
My favorite actors Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen are beautiful examples. Mary-Kate was born in L.A. 13 July 1987. Ashley was born in Sherman Oaks 13 June 1986.
They were popular film stars when they were teenagerS. In movies they often play teenagers who have some problem in their rich lifeS. However, they often OVERCOME THESE problemS IN THE MOVIE VERSION.
Today they are pretty, rich and famous but in their real teenager lifeS they HAVE problemS. For example in 2004 Mary-Kate had A problem with health. She WAS treated FOR anorexia nervosa. I think this is A problem for many teenager who had popularity when they were young. APPEARANCE IS very important TO film stars. Unfortunately sometimes this BECOMES A problem for them.
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