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Dear Shubina

Ref. Spare parts for Argentine

Do you know an estimated date for the arrival of these spare parts? I am having many claims from the customers and I would like to tell them an estimated date so I can solve their problems.

Best Regards

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Is this e-mail ok?
Dear Shubina 

Ref. Spare parts for Argentine

Do you know an estimated date for the arrival of these spare parts? I am having many claims from the customers and I would like to tell them an estimated date so I can solve their problems.

Best Regards

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Many thanks friends is very useful for me.

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 Dear Shubina

Ref. Spare parts for Argentine

Do you have an estimated date for the arrival of these spare parts? I have my customers claim and I would like to tell them an estimated date so I can solve their query.

Best Regards

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Dear Shubina,

Ref. Spare parts for Argentine

Do you have an estimated date for the arrival of the spare parts? I have many customer claims and I would like to give them an estimated date in order to help them.

Best Regards,

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