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A plane crashed in mountains,but the only passengers who were women and her two baby daughters were not hurt. It was midwinter and got extremely cold ,so the woman put the children in a case,covering them with clothes and kept to them all night. When the planes was passing overhead next morning，she stamped out sos in the snow ，this was seen by pilot who sent a message and they were rescued by a helicopter.
“The right answer is":A plane crashed in the mountains, but the only passengers, a young woman and her two baby daughters, were not hurt. It was midwinter and extremely cold, so the woman put the children in a case, covered them with clothes and kept close to them all night. When she heard planes early next morning, she stamped out SOS in the snow. This was seen by a pilot, who sent a radio message, and they were soon rescued by a helicopter.

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please check my answer 
A plane crashed in mountains,but the only passengers who were  women and her two baby daughters were not hurt.   It was midwinter and got extremely cold ,so the woman put the children in a case,covering them with clothes and kept to them all night.    When the planes was passing overhead next morning，she stamped out sos in the snow ，this was seen by pilot who sent a message and they were rescued by a helicopter.
“The right answer is":A plane crashed in the mountains, but the only passengers, a young woman and her two baby daughters, were not hurt. It was midwinter and extremely cold, so the woman put the children in a case, covered them with clothes and kept close to them all night. When she heard planes early next morning, she stamped out SOS in the snow. This was seen by a pilot, who sent a radio message, and they were soon rescued by a helicopter.

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Your answer is right,the short passage looks like a passage from the course book.

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Perfectly fine, I can see no faults with your answer :)

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