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Is this sentence right?Children have too much time may increase the risk of being injured accidentally such as traffic accident, kidnapping or other violence.
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Children that have too much free time run an increased risk of being involved in accidents.
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Children, who have too much time, may have an increased risk of being injured accidentally, such as traffic accident, kidnapping or other violence.
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Children who have too much time may increase the risk of being injured accidentally, such as traffic accident, kidnapping or other violence.
Note the addition of 'who' and the comma (,) after 'accidentally'
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