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I want to correct this sentence "The table illustrates that entertainment of people who range from 30 to 50 years old differs widely from countries." How can i correct this sentence? Thx

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"The table illustrates that entertainment of people who range from 30 to 50 years old differs widely between countries."
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The table illustrates that the way people between the ages of 30 and 50 entertain themselves differs widely from country to country. The sentence is a bit weildy though.
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I agree with Randy's comments. But, while Randy's sentence is fine, I personally would have added another word to the original sentence to be totally clear. "That entertainment of people......differs widely between countries." I would have said either "entertainment choices of" or "entertainment preferences of". Just a personal preference though.

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