I want to know whether there are some mistakes in the sentences!please help me correct it
Because of the staff transfer of our company, we're so sorry to delay the visit so long. Now we had fixed on the dates and the members of this visit. We want to know whether you are still welcome the visit and the discussion about the machinery, and whether you will still send the invitation letter to us.
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We apologize as, due to our company's staff transfer, we have been unable to visit you. We have generated a new schedule to visit with our members. We would like to know if you are still able and willing to accommodate our request. Please let us know your availability and send us a letter of invitation when you are able to speak with us.
I am assuming this is for a business, so I reworded it more professionally, although it is difficult because I don't know exactly what the business is about. There were a few common mistakes such as starting a sentence with because. Also, it is much more professional when you do not use conjugations in formal writing, even in an e-mail to a coworker. Hope this helps!
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Because of the staff transfer of our company, we're so sorry that we haven't visited you for so long. So we already planned a new schedule for our visit, including the members. We want to know whether you will still welcome us to talk about the machinery and if you will still send us the invitation letter.
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