Can you watch for mistakes?
Hi!

Can you correct this?

I do my shopping not the often. That's bacause I just don't have the time for this. For example, when I finish my homework or other tasks, the time is too late to do something more apart going to bed. Here is the reason why I go to buy the goods I need to shopping centres. While I save my time and energy, I can also get some awesome discounts.
The other advantage is that I can find variety of choises of the same product.
I usually pay in cash, because if I pay by credit card as my mother does, I always have to check on the Internet for my money balance before I go shopping.
To sum up, I am really not the shopping maniac and I do the shopping only when it is essential.

Thank you very much!

Question

Can you watch for mistakes?
Hi!

Can you correct this?

I do my shopping not the often. That's bacause I just don't have the time for this. For example, when I finish my homework or other tasks, the time is too late to do something more apart going to bed. Here is the reason why I go to buy the goods I need to shopping centres. While I save my time and energy, I can also get some awesome discounts.
The other advantage is that I can find variety of choises of the same product.
I usually pay in cash, because if I pay by credit card as my mother does, I always have to check on the Internet for my money balance before I go shopping.
To sum up, I am really not the shopping maniac and I do the shopping only when it is essential.

Thank you very much!

Answer

I corrected your paragraph. I tried to change as little as possible, but have it still be correct and a better flow.

I don't go shopping very often. I just don't have the time. After I finish my homework or the other things I need to do, it's too late do anything but go to bed. This is why I go to shopping centers, I can save time, energy, and get some awesome discounts. Another advantage is that I can find many different types of the same product. I usually pay in cash, because if I pay with my credit card, like by mother does, I always have to check my credit card balance on the internet before I go shopping. To sum up, I'm not a shopping maniac and I only go shopping when it's essential.

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You can get answers in the part of "composition book"……People will help you there.

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