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Please change my sentences... **Background I grew up learning about honesty because my father has worked hard as a government employee for 35 years. I am the second daughter of two sisters. Since I was young, my father said, "You should be a strong woman who isn't afraid of challenge." That is the reason why I have travelled the mountains by hitch-hiking with my family every year. I have the spirit which doesn’t avoid the challenge. ***Pros and Cons As much as possible, I try to accept all the work with positive thinking. If I am faced with an outstanding aim, I try to accomplish it patiently. I never give up the work what I have started. Sometimes this personality appears as if I am stubborn. But I exert an effort to make better the weakness in the direction of efficiency. I am not afraid of the challenge. I am proud of this aspect. I traveled to Japan alone. I thought “Yeah! This is a survival!.This experience makes time memorable. These various experiences make me having different way of thinking with other people. I try to set value on the positive part more than negative aspects. I am active and cheerful. I like meeting people. Even though I meet a person accidently, I become a friend with many people. Also, I think that I should treat everything with all my heart. My father said "Don’t tell a lie!"And to be honest with life!".Even though it is a common word, my advantage is honest. During my university life, I realized that the property what a bad man have couldn’t be longer than a good man’s. I am ambitious. Sometimes, I start up some works without thinking. It can easily complete the work. But it can be a reckless challenge. That’s why I make an effort to learn cautious attitude.

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My Background: I grew up learning about honesty because my father worked hard as a government employee for 35 years. I am the second of two daughters.. Since I was young, my father said, "You should be a strong woman who isn't afraid of challenge." That is the reason why I have travelled the mountains by hitch-hiking with my family every year. I have a spirit which doesn’t avoid challenge. ***Pros and Cons As much as possible, I try to accept all work with positive thinking. If I am faced with a lofty goal, I try to accomplish it patiently. I never quit the work which I have started. Sometimes this personality trait makes me appear to be stubborn, but I make every effort to overcome weaknesses and improve my efficiency. I am not afraid of challenge. I am proud of this characteristic. I once traveled to Japan alone and I thought, “Yeah! This is survival!". It was a memorable experience. This and other experiences have helped me to think differently about other people. I try to see the value of positive thinking and avoid being negative. I am active and cheerful. I like meeting people. I become a friend to many people, even though our meeting may be by accident or by chance.. Also, I think that I should do everything with all my heart. My father said, "Don’t lie, and be honest with life!". Even though it is a common word, my advantage is, "honesty". During my university life, I realized that a bad man's property couldn’t be better than a good man’s property. I am ambitious. Sometimes, I start things without thinking. I can easily complete the work, but it can be a reckless challenge. That’s why I make an effort to learn to have a cautious attitude.
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thank you for sharing the touching article
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You wrote a very excellent essay and hope you can write more better ones in the coming times. Very good and wonderful to see your essay. Thank you for sharing.

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