tenses tenses! They're always a tension for me! And when I showed him my canvas, he at once knew that I did it in the loo. And I was crazy enough to feel proud of it; for I somehow felt that his best stories had had their making in the loo. God, I so love the loo! -> is this sentence right? when you're speaking in direct speech, narrating your story about a past? -> How could i make this more interesting?