Could you correct my sentence? XD thanks!
A love story happening between a vampire and a human, breathtaking, a bit romantic with vividly gorgeous and logical rhetoric, is attracting me!
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A love story between a vampire and a person, which is breathtaking, a bit romantic with vivid gorgeousness and logically rhetoric,attracts me!
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This sentence is a little awkward. How about :
A breathtaking love stoy between a vampire and a human has attacted me.
a bit romantic with vividly gorgeous and logical rhetoric, - do not understand it
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