Hello guys! I don't believe that there were no mistakes in my last notebook entry. please, help
here is a link to my essay
http://www.italki.com/notebook/entry/107997.htm
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Hi Stanislav,
You have a very good grasp of written English. I submitted a correction for your TOEFL integrated essay 2. Since my goal is to teach fluent conversational English, I not only made grammatical corrections, but also supplied rewording to make the essay flow more easily. I build my sessions around the concept of being able to have effective and easily understood verbal English communication.
My corrections are probably more involved than some others who submit corrections. That is not to say they are wrong, but simply that I try to incorporate the goal of fluency in my corrections.
Again, let me say that you do very well in your written English. I would love to hear you speak.
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