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Dear Jack,
The day after tomorrow, there will come an American professor, Robinson to deliver a speech which involves in something on the education system of America. This speech will be held at the auditorium this Thusday afternoon. You are lucky enough to get the chance to attend it, so do remember to set down his important points for fear that we don't have any material to discuss after the speech.
Well, another news is that the arranged English reciting contest have to be put off till Saturday morning. Please be sure to come on time.

Who can help me to improve the passage? Thanks!!

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improve the passage
Dear Jack,
    The day after tomorrow, there will come an American professor, Robinson to deliver a speech which involves in something on the education system of America. This speech will be held at the auditorium this Thusday afternoon. You are lucky enough to get the chance to attend it, so do remember to set down his important points for fear that we don't have any material to discuss after the speech.
    Well, another news is that the arranged English reciting contest have to be put off till Saturday morning. Please be sure to come on time.

Who can help me to improve the passage? Thanks!!

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Dear Jack,
 I would like to inform that an american professor, mr. Robinson, is coming in the day after tomorrow to deliver a speech on educational system of the United States. This speech will be held at the auditorium this Thusday afternoon. Fortunately you got the chance to attend it, so remember to set down the important points of his speech, in case we don't have any material to discuss after the it.
 I want to let you know that the arranged English reciting contest have to be put off till Saturday morning. Please be sure to come on time.

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Dear Jack,
The day after tomorrow,  an American professor, Mr. Robinson, will come to deliver a speech which deals with the American eductaional system. This speech will be held at the auditorium this Thusday afternoon. You are lucky enough to get the chance to attend it; so do remember to write down any important points so that we may discuss them after the speech/ so that we have something to discuss after the speech.
Furthermore, the arranged English reciting contest will have to be put off until Saturday morning. Please be sure to come on time.

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Thanks, I read your letters and know the speech (lecture) you told me. I am going to attend .

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