Did I make the right sentence?
Here are some sentences I wrote in argumentations, I'm not sure if they are good or just right. Can you help?
1,Art is such a broad concept that there is no definite distinction between works of art and vulgar works.
2,However, what is worth emphsise here is that reasonable regulations only restrict the publishing of those obviously pseudo artistic works, not intending to affect the real art.
3,People's outlook varies and they value things differently.
Thanks for your attention!
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Answers · 7
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Only ONE mistake!
#2...what is worth emphasisING......
The rest is fine, although I hardly understood a word of it. ^_^
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Here are some opinionative sentences that I wrote. I'm not sure if they are good or just right. Can you help?
1.Art is such a broad concept that there is no definite distinction between works of art and vulgar works.
2.However, what is worth emphasising here, is that reasonable regulations only restrict the publishing of those obviously pseudo artistic works, not intending to affect the real art.
3.People's outlooks vary as they value things differently. OR People's outlooks on art vary as their values are different.
Thanks for your attention!
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Corrections or comments in brackets [ ]
1,Art is such a broad concept that there is no definite distinction between works of art and vulgar works. [correct]
2,However, what is worth [emphasizing] here is that reasonable regulations only restrict the publishing of those obviously [pseudo-artistic] works, not intending to affect the real art.
3,People's outlook varies and they value things differently.
[Correct, but suggest - People's outlook varies and they have different values]
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Your sentences are great and I agree with everyone's corrections.
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Exactly what Eliot said! Read it one more time, this time form me ;)
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