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I will have oral class exam.The content is introduce a famous people to the class. talk like you are a teacher
this is a passage i wrote.i didn't know whether it fit as a teacher say.hope you can help me.
Amelia Earhart

Good morning, ladies and gentleman. Today, I want to introduce a brave woman to you. Her name is Amelia Earhart. Maybe you have heard her story before. Yes, she is the first woman to fly solo across the Atlantic Ocean and setting many aviation records. Actually, I can not find something interesting in her life but something respectable. When she was a child, most American girls at the beginning of the twentieth century were not permitted to play ball or climb trees. But because of her parents, she can do everything as boys so she was characterized as tomboy, which has affected her future career. Amelia was interested in flight at the age of ten, for her father took her a flight.
Her first plane had two sets of wings, a bi-plane bought by herself. George Putnam, an important man in Amelia’s life, sponsors and supports her when Amelia lack of money to buy a plane. Such a great man he was that everyone knows the result—they were married. We are sad that Amelia disappeared when she made a flight of globe in 1937. Fascination with her life, career and disappearance continues to this day.[

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Who can help me?

I will have oral class exam.The content is introduce a famous people to the class. talk like you are a teacher
this is a passage i wrote.i didn't know whether it fit as a teacher say.hope you can help me.
 Amelia Earhart
  
  Good morning, ladies and gentleman. Today, I want to introduce a brave woman to you. Her name is Amelia Earhart. Maybe you have heard her story before. Yes, she is the first woman to fly solo across the Atlantic Ocean and setting many aviation records. Actually, I can not find something interesting in her life but something respectable. When she was a child, most American girls at the beginning of the twentieth century were not permitted to play ball or climb trees. But because of her parents, she can do everything as boys so she was characterized as tomboy, which has affected her future career.  Amelia was interested in flight at the age of ten, for her father took her a flight.
   Her first plane had two sets of wings, a bi-plane bought by herself. George Putnam, an important man in Amelia’s life, sponsors and supports her when Amelia lack of money to buy a plane. Such a great man he was that everyone knows the result—they were married. We are sad that Amelia disappeared when she made a flight of globe in 1937. Fascination with her life, career and disappearance continues to this day.[

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Hello "First";

Your presentation is very good! Here are the corrections necessary in capital letters:

Amelia Earhart

Good morning, ladies and gentleman. Today, I want to TALK TO YOU ABOUT a brave woman  Her name is Amelia Earhart. Maybe you have heard her story before. Yes, she is the first woman to fly solo across the Atlantic Ocean and SHE SET many aviation records. Actually, BEFORE BECOMING FAMOUS I can not find ANYthing interesting in her life - THERE IS NOTHING THAT MAKES HER REMARKABLE AS A CHILD, but ONLY SOMETHING THAT MADE HER FAMILY DIFFERENT FROM OTHER "respectable" ONES. When she was a child, most American girls at the beginning of the twentieth century were not permitted to play ball or climb trees. But because of her parents, she cOULD do everything THAT boys DID so she was characterized as tomboy, which  affected her future career. Amelia was interested in MANNED flight at the age of ten, BECAUSE her father took her ON a flight.
 Her first plane had two sets of wings, IT WAS a bi-plane SHE bought  herself. George Putnam, an important man in Amelia’s life, sponsorED and supportED her when Amelia lackED THE money to buy a plane. HE WAS such a great man , that everyone COULD EXPECT the result—they  married. We are sad that Amelia disappeared when she made a flight of THE globe in 1937. Fascination with her life, career and disappearance continues to this day.

Excellent! The corrections I have made are relatively minor, but takes it from "very good" to "native", I think. If I were you I would admit to having some help. Honesty is the best policy and your teachers will undoubtedly check sites like Italki.

For your information a few years ago they believed they had found her remains on Kirbati. Here is a link:

http://news.discovery.com/history/amelia-earhart-resting-place.html

I don't know whether they were sure, but you could mention this.
Good luck!

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How many time do you have to speak? to mi mynd the context is appropiatte to the task

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