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China is a country with a long history and splendid culture of ancient civilizations. With the reform and opening up, China's tourism has experienced a historic shift. More and more tourists are visiting China, in 1997 the forecast of world tourism organization has predicted by 2020 ，tourists will achieve 1.6 billion, at that time, China will become the world's number one tour destination. But, we also must be more and more clear understanding that tourism industry is vulnerable to natural disasters, disease, political and economic instability,thus making the tourism industry's vulnerability constantly exposed, and disclosing the tourism industry's defects. So to reduce tourism vulnerabilities and the tourism defects ,we need to have a plan to solve these problems.

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China is a country with a long history and splendid culture of ancient civilizations. With the reform and opening up, China's tourism has experienced a historic shift. More and more tourists are visiting China, in 1997 the forecast of world tourism organization has predicted by 2020 ，tourists will achieve 1.6 billion, at that time, China will become the world's number one tour destination. But, we also must be more and more clear understanding that tourism industry is vulnerable to natural disasters, disease, political and economic instability,thus making the tourism industry's vulnerability constantly exposed, and disclosing the tourism industry's defects. So to reduce tourism vulnerabilities and the tourism defects ,we need to have a plan to solve these problems. 

I need help,hope that friends can help me correct my composition mistake~thank you very much,my friends!

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China is a country with a long history and  a splendid culture of ancient civilizations. With various reforms and  the opening up of many  parts of China, its tourism has experienced a historic shift. More and more tourists are visiting China. In 1997  the World Tourism Organization predicted  that by 2020. there would be  1.6 billion tourists. At that time, China will become the world's number one tourist destination. But we must also have a clear understanding that the tourism industry is vulnerable to natural disasters,  outbreaks of disease, political and economic instability. This can make the tourism industry vulnerable, constantly exposed, thus disclosing the tourism industry's defects. So  in order to overcome these problems , we need to have a plan  as  to how we can  solve them.

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