Classical music lovers will have an intensive concert program: seven unique concerts with the best young music
Classical music lovers will have an intensive concert program: seven unique concerts with the best young musicians participation will be held on the main stages of the city.

Is it ok? I'm not sure about "classical music lovers". Thank you for your help.

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Classical music lovers will have an intensive concert program: seven unique concerts with the best young music
Classical music lovers will have an intensive concert program: seven unique concerts with the best young musicians participation will be held on the main stages of the city.

Is it ok? I'm not sure about "classical music lovers". Thank you for your help.

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I think that 'classical music lovers' is OK.  The rest of it, however ......

Maybe something like this:
Classical music lovers will enjoy an intensive concert program: seven unique concerts, involving the best young musicians, will be held on the city's main stages.

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