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Dear Chris Martin, Jon Buckland, Will Champion and Guy Burryman
I’m writing on behalf of my School Club, we are organising a event “How to improve our skill in English Language”.
A important fact is to motivate to the students through the music. Being Coldplay a famous group, whose many of our students are keen fans and would love to hear a talk about you, your new singles and your visit to Peru.
Our event will be on Saturday 30, April. If you’re able to come, I suggest the talk including questions might start at 7:00 pm. if you agree. Also, we are delighted if you join us for dinner afterwards.
Please let us to know you participation and how much would be your fee.
I do hope you are able to come. I look forward to hear from you.
Your faithful,
Maria
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Dear Chris Martin, Jon Buckland, Will Champion and Guy Burryman
I’m writing on behalf of my School Club, we are organising a event called “How to improve our skills in the English Language”.
An important fact is to motivate the students through music. Being Coldplay a famous band, which many of our students are keen fans of, we would be interviewing you to talk about who you are, your new singles and your visit to Peru. (I´m not sure if this is what you meant, but I think that´s how I understood it).
Our event will be held on Saturday, April 30th. If you’re able to come, our questions session will begin at 7pm if you agree. We would also be delighted if you could join us for dinner afterwards.
Please let us know if you would like to participate and how much your participation would cost.
I do hope you are able to come. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely, (or Best regards,)
Maria
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Dear Chris Martin, Jon Buckland, Will Champion and Guy Burryman
I’m writing on behalf of my School Club. We are organising an event “How to improve our skill in the English Language.”
A important topic is to motivate to the students through music. Coldplay is such a famous band which many of our students are keen fans of, so we would be interviewing you on who you are, your new singles, and your visit to Peru.
Our event will be on Saturday 30, April. If you’re able to come, our questions and conversations would begin at 7 pm. If you agree, we would also be delighted if you could join us afterwards for dinner.
Please let us to know if you are able to participate and how much your participation would cost.
I do hope you are able to come. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Maria
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