help me to correct the sentence
Off-grid districts ，maybe some Islands，remote vallages in which can not be connected to the main grid ，need electricity to power up their appliances like LED light，radio，mobile phone charger，TV，etc.

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help me to correct  the  sentence
Off-grid  districts ，maybe  some  Islands，remote  vallages  in  which  can not  be connected to the main grid ，need  electricity  to  power  up their  appliances  like  LED light，radio，mobile phone charger，TV，etc.


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Is  it  wrong?

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" Off-grid districts, which can not be connected to the main grid such as some islands and remote villages need electricity to power up their appliances like LED lights, radios, mobile phone chargers,TV etc.."

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