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As one of the most successful movies predicting disasters of human being, 2012 shocked a lot of people. After watching the movie, more and more so-called authorized scientists began to analyze the future. To be honest,I am not really believe the prediction about Judgment by maya.all the people can't be saved by a Noah's Ark.But I believe that always have the disaster that we can't predict.For example,the eathquake in Wenchun.I still can't forget the confusing sense.In this year,the debris flow in Zhouqu also bring us much pain.Disaster make people at a loss.Today we have the warm sunshine.What we can do?However, instead of trying to escape from the reality or pretending not to be afraid of death, I think more about life.
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As one of the most successful movies predicting disasters of human beings, 2012 shocked a lot of people. After watching the movie, more and more so-called scientists began to analyze the future. To be honest, I don't really believe the prediction about Judgment Day by the Maya.All the people can't be saved by a Noah's Ark. However, I believe that we will always have disasters that we can't predict.For example, I still can't forget the confusion following the earthquake in Wenchun.
This year,the debris flowing in Zhouqu also brought us much pain. Disasters make people feel at a loss.Today we have warm sunshine.
What we can do? Instead of trying to escape from reality or pretending not to be afraid of death, we need to think more about life itself.
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