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A lake's love
Living with violent storms, I am a lake in Land of The Lost.
Up to the sky, my friend amuses me by piercing the sky,
For I have been a mirror of the sun.
Deep down my body, it's a world of silence.
Closed to all colors, too dark to feel my own existence.
But now a little gentle ripples sent from your fingers,
reached my deepest,my heart, Which I thought I hadn't.Up to the sky, my friend amuses me by piercing the sky
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Hi... Nice one!
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A Lake's Love
Living with violent storms, I am a lake in the Land of the Lost.
High above, my friend the sun amused me
By piercing the morning sky,
For I have been a mirror to the sun.
Deep down in my body, there's a world of silence.
Closed to all colors, too dark to feel my own existence.
But then a little gentle ripple sent from your fingers,
Reached deep within my heart,
Which I thought I no longer possessed.
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Excellent!!!
You have written a very beautiful poem in English.
suggestion
But now a little gentle ripple
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But now little gentle ripples
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Beautiful poem. What is the poem portraying? I need some guides.
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Ha real good poem.
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