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Here is my poem. Come and share your views, please. A lake's love Living with violent storms, I am a lake in Land of The Lost. Up to the sky, my friend amuses me by piercing the sky, For I have been a mirror of the sun. Deep down my body, it's a world of silence. Closed to all colors, too dark to feel my own existence. But now a little gentle ripples sent from your fingers, reached my deepest,my heart, Which I thought I hadn't.Up to the sky, my friend amuses me by piercing the sky

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Hi... Nice one!
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A Lake's Love Living with violent storms, I am a lake in the Land of the Lost. High above, my friend the sun amused me By piercing the morning sky, For I have been a mirror to the sun. Deep down in my body, there's a world of silence. Closed to all colors, too dark to feel my own existence. But then a little gentle ripple sent from your fingers, Reached deep within my heart, Which I thought I no longer possessed.
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Excellent!!! You have written a very beautiful poem in English. suggestion But now a little gentle ripple or But now little gentle ripples
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Beautiful poem. What is the poem portraying? I need some guides.
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Ha real good poem.

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