incorporated
how can I describe the sentence correctly?
1:Our hotel is a top-grade commercial hotel incorporated accommodation,food and beverage ,entertainment,shopping,conference,and business into an organic whole.
2:Our hotel is a top-grade commercial hotel incorporated into accommodation,food and beverage ,entertainment,shopping,conference,and business
3:Our hotel is a top-grade commercial hotel that incorporated accommodation,food and beverage ,entertainment,shopping,conference,and business into an organic whole.
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incorporated 
how can I describe the sentence correctly?
1:Our hotel is a top-grade commercial hotel incorporated accommodation,food and beverage ,entertainment,shopping,conference,and business into an organic whole.
2:Our hotel is a top-grade commercial hotel incorporated into accommodation,food and beverage ,entertainment,shopping,conference,and business
3:Our hotel is a top-grade commercial hotel  that incorporated accommodation,food and beverage ,entertainment,shopping,conference,and business into an organic whole.
I APPRECIATE YOU ANSWERING.

Answer

"Our hotel is a top-grade commercial hotel that has incorporated accommodation,food and beverage ,entertainment,shopping,conference,and business into an organic whole."
or:
"Our hotel is a top-grade commercial hotel, incorporating accommodation,food and beverage ,entertainment,shopping,conference,and business into an organic whole."

Also, you might avoid using the same word twice in once phrase:
"Our hotel is a top-grade facility....."

Answer

I'd second fdmaxey's suggestion of using "incorporating".  The flow of the sentence is now smoother, and by keeping it all in the present tense the sentence sounds more active and appealing.

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