Hi Tanya Not many errors: "I'm planning to travel to Europe, but I have never travelled on my own. I don't know where I want to go, or how I can organize it. I like sun, water and nature, but I don't like the sea or the beach very much. I prefer walking to tanning, and I prefer fresh water to salt. I like attractions, such as safari... I went on safari in UAE, but it was unusual (not like the safaris I read about). We went on big dunes by jeep, and after that we went to a small village, where we had some dinner, rode on camels, and one woman made a henna tattoo on my hand. It was wonderful! Hmmm! Where should I go?"

Hello Tanya, Reading through the text, I thought you needed an opinion about travel destinations in Europe, but at the end it was rather about correcting the text :) and Neal did the job I guess!