please, correct my mistakes. Tell me what's wrong in this phrase: 凤凰从自己的废墟上崛起。但是，如果风携带的灰烬？凤凰再生多？/ 许多凤凰重生.
Tell me what's wrong in this phrase: 凤凰从自己的废墟上崛起。但是，如果风携带的灰烬？凤凰再生多？/ 许多凤凰重生. Which one is better? Thanks a lot!Ok, Thanks Ling Alvin. I want to say that "a phoenix (凤凰) can be reborn from its own ashes. But, what happen when ashes are gone with the wind? Do a lot of phoenix reborn?" I hope this let you help me :D thanks again!

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please, correct my mistakes. Tell me what's wrong in this phrase: 凤凰从自己的废墟上崛起。但是，如果风携带的灰烬？ 凤凰再生多？/ 许多凤凰重生.    
Tell me what's wrong in this phrase: 凤凰从自己的废墟上崛起。但是，如果风携带的灰烬？ 凤凰再生多？/ 许多凤凰重生.  Which one is better? Thanks a lot!Ok, Thanks Ling Alvin. I want to say that "a phoenix (凤凰) can be reborn from its own ashes. But, what happen when ashes are gone with the wind? Do a lot of phoenix reborn?" I hope this let you help me :D thanks again!

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I think this is what you mean. 凤凰从自己的灰烬里重生。但是，如果风吹走了灰烬？凤凰会重生出很多只吗？
废墟是ruins. 崛起是gain someone's power 或rise， 风可以用'带'和‘吹'，’携带‘不好。

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Geez....what r u talking about!

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If the story of Phoenix is true, the wind can't blow its ashes away.

Or wherever its remains are, it will gather again for rebirth.

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凤凰可以从自己的灰烬中重生，但当灰烬随风飘飞时会怎样？会有数不尽的凤凰重生吗？

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In my opinion the last one is better.overall the sentence is not fluent.you'd better tell me what do you want to do then i can help you.

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