plz help me to proof-read my translation homework,many thx! 从前的我应着职业的习惯， 作品中多少流露出设计的痕迹。 设计是理性的， 绘画却是感性的。 感性亦或是理性取决于性格， 哲人说性格决定命运。 我的性格使我选择了绘画。 童年时的我就迷恋上了这一情感表达的特殊语言， 我知道 选择绘画是我内心深处的呼唤。 In the past, as for my career habit, my work shows traces of design. Design is rational, but painting is emotional. Emotional or rational depends on character, Philosopher said that character determine destiny. My character makes me choose painting. I begin to obsess of this particular art language since I was just a child. I know Choosing painting is my inner spirit calling. 画家应具备商人的智慧， 但不可有商人的灵魂， 更不可把自己出卖给那些灵魂是商人的商人。 艺术永远只眷顾纯净的心灵。 Artist should have the wisdom of business man, However, artist can not have business man’s soul, Furthermore, Must not sell soul to those businessman who got a greedy soul. Art is always only love the pure hearts and minds. 智慧的艺术家能在平凡的生活中攫取诗意的灵光， 平庸肤浅者却错把下水道误认为是圣泉。 艺术与非艺术之间只有一步之遥。 谁是智者，谁是庸者？ 生命之火照亮着我们的岁月， 喜悦的心灵中 永恒的是思想。 每个人的机会都是同等的， 智者能做出准确的辨断， 而庸者只能被动地接受。 A smart artist can get poetic spirit from ordinary life, Mediocre and Superficial person may take mistaken for sewer to holy spring. Art and non-art is only a step away. Who is the wise man, who is the mediocre? The fire of life illuminates our daily life, in the spirit of joy, thinking is eternal. Each person's opportunity is equal, Wise man can make right chose, Mediocre just passively accept the consequence. 我追求爱情和亲情， 更珍惜友情， 对于和我一样珍惜友情的朋友， 我会加倍珍惜。 I’m chasing love and family affection. Furthermore, I cherish the friendship. As those people who cherish the friendship the same as me, I will cherish them more. 走得太近看不清， 走得太远也看不清， 方寸之间是距离。 We can not see clearly when too close to the scene, Also can not see clearly when too far, This is distance. 我梦想拥有一个庄园， 庄园里鲜花烂漫。 那儿住着我和我的父母， 还有我美丽善良的妻子。 我在花园里作画， 朋友们时常相聚在一起， 每年找一个有趣的地方旅游， 人与人之间和睦相处， 真诚没有欺骗，友善互助。 我知道 世间真的会有这么一个桃花源。 I dream of a manor, there are beautiful followers blossom everywhere. My parents and I live there, also with my beautiful and kindness wife. I draw in the garden. Friends often visiting, picking interesting place to Travel each year, people Harmoniously live together, Generous without creating, friendly and helpful. I know there is really exists such a fantasy paradise in the world. （十） 深秋的黄昏， 我漫步在师大校园中， 一阵凉风拂面而来， 吹落了梧桐树上摇摇欲坠的黄叶。 树叶缓慢的跌落在了我的脚前， 仿佛从天而降的天使， 来向我传递上帝的福音。 她对我说， “请不要惊慌， 我是上帝派来给你祝福的， 祝福你今后的生活充满阳光和音乐。 一切都会好起来的， 美丽的生活即将向你绽放…… 我始终试图用最能表达我内心世界的艺术语言，去还原我的生活状态、表达我对生命的思索。 ——这就是我对生活与绘画的感悟。 Late autumn evening, I walked in the Shanghai Normal University’s campus, a cool wind blowing trough me, overblown the crumbling yellow leaves of the parasol tree. The leaves slowly fallen down and lie in front of my feet, As if an angel coming from the heaven, who comes to me for delivering the gospel of God. She said to me, "Do not upset, God send me to blessing you, Bless your future life is full of sunshine and music. Everything will get better, Beautiful life will soon bloom to you ... ... I have always tried to choose the art language which can best expressing my inner spirit world, to represent my life status, to express my thoughts on life. - This is my understanding of life and painting.