Is this sentenece grammatically correct?
Advertisement disseminate the information of goods to attract consuners to buy them, for which phenomenon many people argue that nowadays people are buying things not for their real needs.

I find two sentences on the Internet that shows the usage of 'for which phenomenon'.

1. During the fall the sun is obscured and objects assume yellow or ashy hue, as during an eclipse of the sun, for which phenomenon the mist were usually mistaken by the ancient chroniclers.

2. There are nearly always gender aspects to genocides, for which phenomenon the term “gendercide” was first proposed by Mary Ann Warren (1946-2010) and then appropriated by Jones and others.

Question

Is this sentenece grammatically correct?
Advertisement disseminate the information of goods to attract consuners to buy them, for which phenomenon many people argue that nowadays people are buying things not for their real needs.

I find two sentences on the Internet that shows the usage of 'for which phenomenon'.

1. During the fall the sun is obscured and objects assume yellow or ashy hue, as during an eclipse of the sun, for which phenomenon the mist were usually mistaken by the ancient chroniclers.

2. There are nearly always gender aspects to genocides, for which phenomenon the term “gendercide” was first proposed by Mary Ann Warren (1946-2010) and then appropriated by Jones and others.

Answer

I would say something like:

Advertisements disseminate (if you want to use a fancy word) / present information about goods, which attract / entice / encourage consumers to buy them. Many argue that this has created a recent phenomenon of people buying things they do not really need.

It sounds more logical to me to make it into two sentences.

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