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In January this year, a cloud of the coronavirus shrouded China
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In January this year, the coronavirus crisis descended on China.
In January this year, China was engulfed by the coronavirus crisis.
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In January of this year, the entire country of China was shrouded in a cloud of Coronavirus.
China was shrouded in a cloud of Coronavirus in January of this year.
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"In January this year, a cloud enveloped China: The coronavirus."
PS: "shrouded" is not a great word here, because is usually means "hidden." (Also, even if you meant that, "enshrouded" is better. The "en" prefix implies an action. [Eg: To "entrance" means to put in a trance.] "Shrouded" implies a continuing status).
PPS: "shrouded" also can refer to being covered with a funeral shroud, so "shrouded" might work better if you used a scarier or more morbid word than 'cloud" : "In January, death enshrouded China, as the coronavirus killed thousands of people."
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Hello!
I would say it like this:
"In January this year, China was engulfed by a wave of the coronavirus".
I changed the sentence around to emphasize the fact that China was engulfed by the virus.
"engulfed" is a good word to use to describe something being completely covered and "wave" is a good word to use as it describes something that covers everything in its path.
I hope that helps!
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