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hi everybody i need one composition about jewel. please
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Hi Hebe, here is a composition about jewels but I don't suggest thst you just pretend thet you wrote it. You can get some good ideas however.
http://www.readbookonline.net/readOnLine/22781/
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Hello Hebe,
Check this site :
http://ajewelrystory.blogspot.com/
It tells stories about reasons, motivations and inspirations that lead to creating beautiful jewelry pieces.
It could give you some ideas to choose the theme of your composition.
If you have decided about the main idea you want to write about *it is better you do it yourself as Marie mentioned* you could contact me , I can help you draw the outlines of the composition and correct your mistakes.
加油;)
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hi hebe,
sometimes, it take a crazy thing to be able to come up with good compositions. maybe these tips will help you in writing (a poem / song) something about a jewel:
1. appearance - how does it look like? a modern design jewelry or an old fashioned one?
2. value - does it has any sentimental value to you?
3. worth - is it made of fine and high grade materials / ore? how precious that jewel is?
4. relation - does it (jewel) has anything to do with your life or with your family? how did it change the way of your living?
you can actually tell a story about that jewel or you can simply describe it by how you appreciate it.
just write something as simple as you can.
:)
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Hello Hebe
It will be better for you to write something about it and then if you want someone here will check that for you.
It is not good or helpful to do the composition instead of you...
Hope you understand here
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