Can you check this for me ? Please it's really important .
I see it as an opportunity, an actual experience that would allow me to connect with people of other cultures
which is the main reason why I've been trying to better my english lately and I was thinking about starting off
with another language maybe ...? I mean why not it literally gives you the ability to view things throught a
different layer so to speak, so like you start thinking in another language and that implies you perceiveing
everything in a different light.
So it's not quite about the language itself , it's about all the things that are part of that language,
the people,the culture, the humor which is most likely not the same ..., all of these subtle things (nuances??)...
and as a result of that you're getting a widen prospective on everything really .
I believe it just makes your life richer and helps you grow as an individual overall.
When it comes to what I'd like to do in my company . Well not gonna lie , finding myself in a multicultural
environment and having to deal with many people is what I'd like the most , but hey it's still an opportunity,
so , something that would fit what my knoledge is based off of what I've been learning so far throught 5 year of HighSchool
or whatever really would be fine as well .
( I'm not sure whether I should pinpoint an actual job...)
So yeah the biggest achievement would be just immersing myself in a new culture, making as many connection/ friends(??)
as possibile, learning as much as I can from everyone and everything to make the most out of this experience .
Time's almost up , so I'll try to keep it short
I still don't know what I want to do after high school, mhh I haven't figured out the whole thing yet, not sure
what I should do , If I should follow one of my passions or just find a job , or go to uni abroad ( which is
something that would be hard to do but I'm definetely considering ).
I hope these 3 months can give me some time by myself to think about what's best for me .
I hope you choose me , have a fantastic day .
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Answers · 2
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This should be posted in the notebook section where there are good editing tools.
It is a long text and most correctors don't correct long texts because of the effort.
If you don't get any responses, try posting each paragraph separately.
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I’d suggest that you post this is the “Notebook” section of Italki. It’s for long pieces like this one.
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