Does my following sentence make any sense?
He witnessed not one, but many trials in court, where the cases of child killers and animal abusers were hushed up by sharks in disguise of lawyers.

Is it correct? It's my translation..

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Does my following sentence make any sense?
He witnessed not one, but many trials in court, where the cases of child killers and animal abusers were hushed up by sharks in disguise of lawyers.

Is it correct? It's my translation..

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I'd update it to say "by sharks disguised as lawyers"

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It's pretty good. I'd update it to say "by sharks disguised as lawyers"

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