Generally okay with a few grammatical errors, but I think what you're trying to say may have been lost in translation. I’d like to learn Swedish culture in order to choose a better way in my life - "choose a better way in my life" sounds kind of odd. It's grammatically correct, but I don't think it necessarily means exactly what you're intending. Perhaps something like "I'd like to learn Swedish culture in order to learn new experiences"? I’d like to serve a positive impact on people’s lives with life-friendly items and services -I'd like to serve AS a positive impact on people's lives with life-friendly items and services --- "life-friendly items and services" is correct, but it seems a bit odd as well, maybe that's just my personal opinion. I’d like to work with coworkers who realize meaningful value for sustainability -Not entirely sure exactly what you wanted to say here either, perhaps something like "I'd like to work with coworkers who see the value of sustainability"?