please correct my essay hello my friends.I have been joined Italki website sins yesterday.at first I started discussion with this title( hi everybody).at discussion I told I want partner for practicing English with lot of mistakes but 2 member answered me and want to communicate with me but unfortunately one of them ask me whatsapp id that I dont have and the other one when I went to her private chat she didnt answer me.at first I disappointed but i dont give up.later that day I put my writing at the answer section in Italki for correction my sentence then suddenly one persen correct my sentences and accept my partner asking and I talked about difrent thing in English and I learn a lot but I steel need to help.I also needed correction of this essay.(laugh) tank you for readying this full of fals sentences essay