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Hello everybody . Please correct my text of my song . Here's :
[Verse 1]
Fire in your eyes
Are Lighting my dark side.
Warm in your hands
Is melting my cold heart.
Hold my hand.
Look at my eyes.
Hold my hand.
Dont let me fall into dark.
[Chorus]
Darkness is warping me
I cant help myself
Darkness is hidden me
I don't want .
This world.
[Verse 2]
Tears of yours
Are fading my failers.
Smile of yours
Is getting me hope.
And I stay and pry.
When my fears will die.
And I stay and want.
To go to the place of light.
[Bridge]
Don't let sleep in this place.
Don't let go look at my face.
You misunderstoond my life.
You must know I doomed to fight .
[Chorus]
Darkness is warping me
I cant help myself
Darkness is hidden me
I don't want .
This world.
[Verse 3]
Fire in your eyes
Are Lighting my dark side.
Warm in your hands
Is melting my cold heart.
Hold my hand.
Look at my eyes.
Hold my hand.
Dont let me fall into dark.
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Fire in your eyes
Lighting up my dark side. (i'm not sure what you meant by these two lines - this means "highlighting/showing/revealing"!)
Warmth in your hands
Is melting my cold heart.
Hold my hand.
Look into my eyes.
Hold my hand.
Dont let me fall into darkness.
[Chorus]
Darkness is warping me
I cant help myself
Darkness is hiding me
I don't want .
This world.
[Verse 2]
Tears of yours
Are fading/diminishing my failures.
Smiles of yours
Are giving me hope.
And I stay and pry. (Pry is to look when you are not supposed to be looking - eg. Prying into someone's private life - reading someone's diary!)
When will my fears die?
I stay and wait.
To go to the place of light.
[Bridge]
Don't let sleep into this place.
Don't let go, look at my face.
You misunderstood my life.
You must know I am doomed to fight .
[Chorus]
Darkness is warping me
I cant help myself
Darkness is hiding me
I don't want .
This world.
[Verse 3]
Fire in your eyes
Lighting up my dark side.
Warmth in your hands
Is melting my cold heart.
Hold my hand.
Look into my eyes.
Hold my hand.
Dont let me fall into darkness.
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