Could you correct any mistake?
When I was a little boy, I used to be a very smart and curious guy.I really enjoyed playing on my old computer, one day I was playing on it and I came across a game that seemed like a lot of fun, but it wasn’t a free game and I couldn’t pay for it.I’m not proud of it but my perseverance helped me to be who I am today. So now I’ll tell you what happened to me.I was looking for a way to get that game without having enough money, I don’t know how but at the age of four I invaded the Federal Government System and I detected a missile that would be sent to destroy my country.Since that day I have been working for the president and The United States Intelligence Community?

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The only things I can see that are strictly wrong are punctuation. 
There should be a full stop (period) between "...my old computer" and "One day I was playing..."
There should be a full stop (period) between "...without having enough money" and "I don’t know how but..."
And at the very end, there should be a full stop rather than a question mark.

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