This is really good. Just a couple of suggestions: 1st line: Change 'rapidly' to 'rapid' 4th line: Change 'affects' to 'effects' and change 'by global warming' to 'of global warming' 7th line: Change 'can not' to 'cannot' 8th line: Change 'regenerated' to 'be regenerated' 9th line: Change 'which is not only' to 'which are not only' 11th line: Change 'happiness' to 'happy' With my corrections, the re-typed essay will look like this: Although many people claim that, along with the rapid economic development, a lot of environmentally friendly inventions will be made. I believe, however, that deliberately slow the economic growth rate and limit greenhouse gas emissions are the efficient way to prevent effects of global warming. Firstly, resources are not inexhaustible. Rapidly economic growth leads to natural resources be exhausted speedy. It brings about renewable energy cannot be regenerated in time. So that the natural balance will be destruction. Last but not least, limit greenhouse gas emissions which are not only to prevent the global warming, but also to create a comfortable environment that we are living. We can feel more happy and healthy in a clean world. In summary, it is clear that we should deliberately slow the economic growth rate and limit greenhouse gas emissions to prevent the threat from global warming. Realize the sustainable development of natural resources, and protect our living environment. You're doing really well! Keep it up!