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On the following graph we can see the situation in regards to the energy consumption in the US. As we can see, there have also been made projections up to the 2030.
Out of the six represented types of fuel, Petrol and Oil was, and according to the projections will be the most used. Despite the slight decline during the early 1980s, it is expected that by 2030 the consumption of Petrol and Oil will increase up to 47 quadrillion units.
In second and third places, coal and natural gas were at almost the same level of consumption in 2008. However, by 2030 the consumption of coal is expected to be higher than natural gas with 32 and 25 quadrillion units respectively.
The three remaining types of fuel, which are nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower were at the same level in 1980. By the 2030 the usage of hydropower will remain almost unchanged. Nuclear and solar/wind usage will be insignificantly higher.
It is clear, that by 2030 the energy distribution by fuel will change insignificantly.
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On the following graph, we can see the situation in regards to the fuel consumption in the US. Projections for up to year 2030 are also shown.
Out of the six types of fuel and as shown in the projections, petrol and oil will be the most consumed in the future. Despite the slight decrease in consumption in early 1980s, petrol and oil consumption are expected to increase up to 47 quadrillion units by 2030.
For the second and third most consumed fuel, coal and natural gas were at almost the same level of consumption in 2008. By 2030, the consumption of coal is expected to be higher than natural gas by 7 quadrillion units.
The three remaining types of fuel, which are nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower were at the same level in 1980. By 2030, the hydropower consumption will remain almost unchanged. Nuclear and solar/wind consumption will be significantly higher.
In conclusion, by 2030, the fuel consumption in the US will change significantly.
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