!quick proofreading for a native English speaker!
A friend of mine asked me to check a couple of sentences from their story and I have no idea if it has any grammar or punctuation mistakes, pleeease help us:

"These creatures love cold weather, they silently sneak back and forth through the chilly air on the rooftops unheard and unseen by anyone, moving smoothly and quickly by frozen wires and chimneys and hide in abandoned attics.
Look carefully and you can catch a glimpse of them."

Thanks in advance!

Question

!quick proofreading for a native English speaker!
A friend of mine asked me to check a couple of sentences from their story and I have no idea if it has any grammar or punctuation mistakes, pleeease help us:

"These creatures love cold weather, they silently sneak back and forth through the chilly air on the rooftops unheard and unseen by anyone, moving smoothly and quickly by frozen wires and chimneys and hide in abandoned attics.
Look carefully and you can catch a glimpse of them."

Thanks in advance!

Answer

"These creatures love cold weather. They silently sneak back and forth through the chilly air on the rooftops, unheard and unseen by anyone, moving smoothly and quickly by frozen wires and chimneys, and hiding in abandoned attics.
Look carefully and you can catch a glimpse of them."

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