Is my text correct?
I was born in November so my birthday was in last month. I've got brown eyes and black hair color.
I like eating pizza, I like running, I like learning languages and I like laughing with my friends. I don't like playing to soccer, basketball and handball and I don't like dancing. These teams games are so complicated...
I don't have pets, but my favorite animal is sloth. He's a mammal of Tropical South America. He lives in the nature. He sleeping during the day.
He has got a long claws for eating leaf and stay in top of the trees for escap to predators. Sloths haven't got odour so this is more difficult to capture it.
Sloths are unfortunately in extinction because his natural habitat is in deforestation.
This is my favorite animal, he's little bit creepy in the beginning but so cute.
Is this natural?
Thank you in advance.
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Answers · 6
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Hi! This is Dr Tj and i live in the UK. I appreciate your attempt as english is not your native language but you are learning which is good. There are few mistakes, so i will point them out for you.
1: when you write in english especially for academic purpose, please never use contractions. Do not write i've got or something like that, instead write i have got.
2: No need to say i have got brown eyes, simply say i have brown eyes.
3: I don't like playing to soccer is not correct, write i don't like playing soccer.
4: No need to mention these team games,say
These games are complicated or i find them complicated.
5: write he sleeps during the day
6: write he has long claws no needs to write he has got.
7: write stays on top of trees to escape from the predators
8: Sloths are becoming exticnt because of deforestation.
I hope it will help you in wrting next time.
Best of kuck.
Regards,
Dr Tj
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As far as i see , it has some grammatical mistakes. Grammar is like mathematics and vocabulary is like chemistry .
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