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how is my translation,if i have something wrong,can you help me correct it? thanks a lot. Three Little Words That Work !! (1)The three little words are: 'Hold On, Please...' Saying this, while putting down your phone and walking off (instead of hanging-up immediately) would make each telemarketing call so much more time-consuming that boiler room sales would grind to a halt. Then when you eventually hear the phone company's 'beep-beep-beep' tone, you know it's time to go back and hang up your handset, which has efficiently completed its task. These three little words will help eliminate telephone soliciting. ******* 三个简短的单词就会起作用!! (1)这三个词是:“请别挂电话……” 这么说的同时,放下手中的电话,然后离开(而不是立即挂断)就会使每个销售电话消耗更多的时间然后慢慢停下来。当你最终听到电话公司里“嘟嘟嘟”的声音时,你就知道可以回去挂电话了,这样就有效地完成了任务。 这三个简短的单词就帮助你消除了电话恳求的烦恼。

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Hey tigger! Obviously I don't speak Chinese but from the English side this looks good; the only thing I might change would be, in "...would make each telemarketing call so much more time-consuming that boiler room sales would grind to a halt" would perhaps be the first "would" to "will"; it just seems a little more natural to me but I don't know what verb tense the original Mandarin is in so I couldn't say for sure. Either way it works. :)

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