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Social Practice in Education
Recently,social practice has become more and more popular in the college students.I do believe there are some seasons for the phenomenon.
Firstly,social practice gives us college students g good chance to experince the word outside of the school yard. In the social practice ,we can not depend on the book totally, we have to solve the problem based on the reality by ouselves.
Secondly,social practice tells us the shortcoming we have to improve .Most of the time, we will chose the social practice related with our majors,so by this,we can use the things we learn from the calss.Absolutely,the progress of social practice will show us the things demanded by the society.
Thirdly ,we can meet different people and learn lot from them. In the social practice, we will meet persons we like or dislike, we have to face many situations which need us to be flexible and smart. Of course, our boss and colleagues are good teachers in interpersonal relationship and professional working skills for us. These would benefit us in our future career.
So ,I hold the view that the position of social practice in education is very important and it should be a part of the whole education.
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Recently, social practice is becoming more and more popular with college students. I believe there are some reasons for this phenomenon.
The first reason is that social practice gives college students a good chance to experience the world outside of the school yard. In the social practice, we can not depend solely on books, we have to solve realistic problems by ourselves.
The second reason is that social practice tells us our shortcomings in which we need to improve upon. Most of the time, we will chose a social practice related with our majors, so that we can use the things we learn from school. In the process of social practice, we will experience many things society demands from us.
The third and last reason is that we can meet different people, and learn a lot from them. In social practice, we may meet people we like or dislike, but regardless, we will face many situations which we need to be flexible and smart. Of course, our boss and colleagues are good teachers in interpersonal relationship and professional working skills for us. These experiences will benefit us in our future career.
In conclusion, I hold the view that the position of social practice in education is very important and it should be a part of the whole education.
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Recently, social practice is becoming more and more popular with college students. I believe there are several reasons for this phenomenon.
The first reason is that social practice gives us college students a chance to experience the world outside of school. In the social practice, we can not depend on books, we must use our own skills to solve real problems.
The second reason is that social practice informs us of our shortcomings. Often, we chose a social practice related with our majors, so we can use the things we learn from school. In the process of social practice, we experience the demands of society and and learn how to deal with them.
The third reason for the popularity is the opportunity to meet new people and learn from them. In social practice, we will meet people we like and people we dislike. We will face many situations which challenge us. In these situations, our boss and colleagues teach us interpersonal skills and professional habits. All these experiences will help us to be better in our future career.
In conclusion, it is my view that the position of social practice in education is very important and it should be a part of the whole education system.
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more and more 虽然可以这么说但效果不太好， 不够“书面”
Recently, social practice is becoming increasingly more popular with college students.
I believe there are some seasons for the phenomenon.
这句话就多语了，没有意义的。
除非你想说的是
I would like to discuss with you some of the reasons I believe this is happening.
In the social practice ,we can not depend on the book totally 改成
Social practice cannot be taught out of a book,
we have to solve the problem based on the reality by ourselves.
What problem? 你没有提过任何problem, 你指什么我都不知道。
下面的错误比较多，包括语法。 你最好给我们看一下中文版。
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改了下，不知道对不对。我发现你写东西好像习惯用中式英语，英语里很多语法表达意思和中文的思路是不一样的。多看点文章就明白了。
Recently,social practice has become more and more popular for the college students. I do believe there are some seasons for the phenomenon.
Firstly,social practice gives us college students a good chance to express the word outside of the school. In the social practice ,we can not depend on the book totally, we have to solve the problem on the basis of reality by ouselves.
Secondly,social practice let us know the shortcoming we need to improve .Mosly, we will chose the social practice related with our majors ,in this way,we can use the things we learn from the class.Absolutely,the progress of social practice will show us what demanded by the society.
Thirdly ,we can meet different people and learn a lot from them. In the social practice, we will meet persons we like or dislike, we have to face many situations which need us to be flexible and smart. Of course, our boss and colleagues are good teachers in interpersonal relationship and professional working skills for us. These would benefit us in our future career.
So ,I hold the view that the position of social practice in education is very important and it should be a part of the whole education.
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