Is there anything grammatically wrong or inappropriate？
Certificate This is to certify that Mr. Lee, male, student No:2015955, was born on May 4th, 1996, having passed National College Entrance Examination, was enrolled in Economics School of China Ocean University in Sepetember, 2014, majoring in International Economics and Trade. The length of schooling is four years. Now he is a Senior.Academic Divison of China Ocean University

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Is there anything grammatically wrong or inappropriate？
Certificate This is to certify that Mr. Lee, male, student No:2015955,  was born on May 4th, 1996, having passed National College Entrance Examination, was enrolled in Economics School of China Ocean University in Sepetember, 2014, majoring in International Economics and Trade. The length of schooling is four years. Now he is a Senior.Academic Divison of China Ocean University

Answer

It would be unusual, and arguably pointless to only give a surname.
...the National...
Examination, enrolled
... the Economics...
September
...was four... - but the sentence sounds awkward. 'He has attended for four years' would be better.

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