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I''m learning how to write e-mails in English. Could you check what I wrote, please? Dear Jonn and Mary, Thank you for you letter. Sorry that I didn't answered earlier. A week ago I went in a new restaraunt near my house. It was a bad idea.. I got food poisoning! I was feeling really terrible, so I spent a few days at home, lying in bed. Now everything is fine, I'm feeling much better. I'm so glad that you coming, I'm looking forward to it. When will you be coming? I just can't wait. We have so much to visit and so much to do. I think, first of all, we should go to a Saint-Peter Church. It's an amazing place, there are a lot of souvenir shops nearby and a big lovely park. We defenetly should visit a Grand Beach, you would love it: clean and warm water, white sand and a fantactic band which plays every evening. I suppose it would more fun and convinient if you stay at my place, what do you think? Write me again, please. See you soon, Love, Nataly

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I would say: Last week, not a week ago. I went to a new, not in a new. I get, not I got. I felt, not was feeling. Lying on bed. I feel much better. I´m so glad that you are coming. When will you come? So much places to visit. We should go to Saint Peter Church. defenetly is not correct; it's definitely. visit Grand Beach; no a it would be more convenient if you stayed. Only little mistakes. Overall the letter is well written.
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Thank you, I copy there!
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Hello Natalie, it is better to put things like this in 'notebook', it is easier to correct.

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