Would you check the punctuation? Should you have a good command of Russian, i need the revision On the edge of the forest, On the edge of the village, Near a wooden hut, The children had gathered in a round dance. Had played, laughed, Chased each other ... Tired so much: Just dropped from fatigue. Suddenly, from somewhere from the forest, All crumpled like a nut leaf Behind his back a rucksack he carries. Old man goes to them. Slowly he walks them round Looks at them, sniffs the air, Throws his arms aside -- As though putting a spell. He initiates like this: 'I carry my tales behind my back. One of them I'll tell you. It is interesting, there's a hidden hint: For good kids a lesson. ...There once was a bull-calf, a good fellow, Pipe-formed lips, the tail like a tube Loved the bull to play, Run, skip and jump. He had a friend: fox, 'I am a fox, a cunning face, Everywhere I go, never in a hurry, All notice, all about everybody know, Being with all friends( or chummy with everybody), visit all as a guest.'